Riel Tizzano

Rookie (July 13th,1990 / Columbus, OH)

Cinderella Lied - Poem by Riel Tizzano

cinderella lied,
she never lost her glass slipper
only her virginity...
and so did he,
(the prince, i mean)
he lost himself inside her,
somewhere deep between the sheets
(between the lines)
and between the sheets
he read her passion
felt her lust
grasped her thrust
cinderella lied

Comments about Cinderella Lied by Riel Tizzano

  • (7/17/2009 4:58:00 PM)

    This is a great poem. It's good to have a different point of veiw, because really those fairy tales are not as amazing as the seem when you look deeper into the ideas and whatnot. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/21/2008 11:22:00 PM)

    Thats freaking awesome! I loved it, it was a good take the other boring versions of the story, great job. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/30/2008 8:11:00 PM)

    THis is a drty twisted verision of his stor and i would bevearry embarresed if i were writein this about that wonderful tale (Report)Reply

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  • (2/29/2008 6:50:00 PM)

    wow that is a really ruded thing to write about if you have ever seen cinderella you would think aout it agian and why does every thing have to be about sex its completley ridiculus and yeah i have seen that movie over and over and again and i don't recall any of that stuff going on so this is what i recommend go watch the movie and get her head out of your behind, rethink what you just wrote about and then go deal with the issues you obvisouly have! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/10/2008 5:43:00 PM)

    I Love it, I like it how you said it in a 'funny' way
    ......but she did loose her glass slipper LOL
    voted 10/10 for it and added it as my favorite poem

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 22, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011

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