A Moments Escape Poem by Bonnie Collins

A Moments Escape

Rating: 3.7

Take me back in time
Open my timeless capsule of
your soul

Walk down my cobblestoned path
decorated with all the memories
that made us warm

Once agan the starlights will
enhance our foolish hearts

Like Cinderella, all will end
at the stirke

But oh what melodramatic souls we Have!


I like your poem. It's a fine write. Good job. Keep going.

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James Foulk 30 May 2008

a wonderful poem very well penned

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David Threadgold 03 September 2008

Hi Bonnie. a well thought out piece and a pleasure to read. Regards Dave T.

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Nathaniel Booker 03 September 2008

Refreshing and nostalgic at the same time *10*. Be Well, Nate

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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

What a truly beautiful poem. Sometimes to only escape for a time.. This is such a romantic piece..

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really good poetry. loved it

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Duh Huh 20 February 2009

Beautiful imagery of the heart. Thank you. :)

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Ron Flowers 25 January 2009

A truly beautiful poem, Bonnie. Ron

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 January 2009

Hi Bonnie and this was truly an enchanting read and it had a very warm touch to it. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Indira Renganathan 22 January 2009

A decent love with melodramatic souls

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Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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