Circuit Poem by Shreya Hacks

Circuit

Rating: 5.0


Round and round we go around
All in a defined series
Shock received by each one
Some get early some delayed

The one who bear and still remain
Is the one who passes the current forward
One cannot pass it further remains
Is thrown out from the chain.

Wednesday, October 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 16 February 2021

Lets just try not to fall off!

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Captain Cur 16 February 2021

Good write! We are all part of the earth's circuit, pulling on that long round electrified chain.

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Kostas Lagos 21 October 2020

Patience is what we need...beautiful poem

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