Kings And Paupers Poem by Sheeya Hacks

Very well presented, an engaging write.

Two shades of life.... but death doesn't discriminate anyone, for it all are one. Beautiful poem with a message. Welcome to Poemhunter Shreya. keep sharing and keep reading.10

An insightful depiction of vanity upon vanity that is the life of human kind. A highly philosophical yet spiritual piece of poetry, insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Lovely poem bristling with wisdom. Thanks for sharing Sherya. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

This is simply fantastic.......thank u......anjandev roy.

Kings! ! ! They rule the world! ! ! ! But, they cannot carry everything along, After they die! Buried in the same coffin. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

If I could, I'd send you a message to tell you that I left stars and comments on Kings And Paupers, from 2016. ;)

I doubt this poem will help paupers OR kings, but it was entertaining and (basically) well-written. I'll give you 4 stars. bri : )

Sheeya, Yesterday you left a nice (and smart) comment on my recent poem Venomous (Words) . Thankyou! I hope you survive well any venomous words OR snakes! ! : ) bri

For clarity aka 'in order to make things clear', I suggest you begin your first stanza with 'Kings' and your second stanza with 'Paupers'. Those 'same coffins' must get VERY CROWDED! !

'Wear to cover the body'....I think you left out a word. They wear what? : ) 'No money to enjoy life' I suggest putting 'Have' in front of 'No'.