Clarity Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Clarity

Rating: 4.9


We will continue to suffer
Even with large stocks of buffer
Golden opportunities with lucrative offers
Desires will not end even with full of coffer

We go for unending wishes and lust
Search for gold in waste and dust
Priority for needs and availability must
Best things available but allow it to rust

It is tendency to ask for more
New horizons and areas to explore
It is good not to sit idle and rest
Maximum utility with result always best

Nothing comes in the way for trying well
Excessive zeal may create position like hell
Good rain may result more yields in crops
Excess of any thing is contrary and great show flops

Habit of looking back is very good and essential quality
Serves as pointer for its best use and utility
Consolidation of gain is in no way any hindrance
Key to success with confidence at entrance

Short cuts and goals don’t go together
Mission in failure always worry and bother
No surety for success in vision illusory
Several set backs and stage to feel sorry

You must apply brakes and feel contended
Nothing should bother you and feel offended
It is part of life and face it resolutely
With clear mind of visionary accept it absolutely

It may not happen all of sudden
It will be adding more of burdens
Wisdom should prevail with clarity in mind
Not to loose peace with gesture always kind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luwi Habte 10 September 2009

dear, you never satisfy by your poems but every one do as you are the best poet as i think so, as usual this poem is also nice one, this is obvious to be so keep writing and reminding us that you are doing best best wishes luwi

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Subbaraman N V 10 September 2009

'Wisdom should prevail'- well said! A good theme and form! Congrats!

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Sagarika Shah 08 September 2009

We will continue to suffer Even with large stocks of buffer Golden opportunities with lucrative offers.........10

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Vijay Menon 05 September 2009

makes a nice reading fine write10+++

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Christina Phan 04 September 2009

its very thoughtful and creavty kept it up 10++

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 07 January 2010

‘…Desires will not end even with full of coffer…’ Desire is flame brightens by ungratifications…remedy is contentment with little… But we’re in whirlpool of consumerist society …provoking ... enticing… Gluttering without satisfying 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Twinkle Vohra 14 September 2009

Nothing comes in the way for trying well Excessive zeal may create position like hell Good rain may result more yields in crops

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Sachin Goswami 14 September 2009

It may not happen all of sudden It will be adding more of burdens Wisdom should prevail with clarity in mind

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John Shea 12 September 2009

Clarity is a cloudy and vague part of my life.So thank you my friend for trying to open my eyes to its rightfull space in my time. Really enjoyed the poem and the message it sends is full of clear a nd meaning full emotion. John

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 September 2009

Wisdom should prevail with clarity in mind Not to loose peace with gesture always kind..................yet vision needs clarity, wonderfu words of wisdom as wrought by imagery, good rhyming too,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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