Clockwise Comments
gold pink orange dawn
rise up refreshed in sunshine
like a fragrant bloom
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Brilliant presentation of the magnificent colors of day and night. Beautifully crafted and depicted. Your imagery made me at close range with the marvelous colors! ! ! Five Stars!
Thank you so much for the fine words of appreciation and the rating.
A beautiful poem with an apt title, describing a full day and night clockwise. Loved some of the lines, like: 'Gold pink orange dawn rise up refreshed in sunshine'..... 'birds sing to summer'..... 'shadows lengthen into night'.... 'diamond stars are twinkling fire'.
I love imagery-it allows you to express so many things, and gives liveliness to the scenes described. I'm glad this verse resonated with you. Thank you for your kind words.
Indeed this is clockwise always never making mistakes. Thank-you.
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12/9/2025 12:53:48 AM # 1.0.0
Any time of day is transformed to a fabulous poem by your pen Evelyn!
Each phase of the day has its own special charm. Thank you very much.