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I want to hold you close forever,
to savor the vivid, fleeting intimacy,
that, like candy, seems gone too soon.

I'm a practical person, so I asked Peter,
"What works better, duct tape or velcro? "

Sure, some things will be awkward, at first,
like walking, thanksgiving dinner with parents,
shopping, bathing and driver's license photos
but those always suck - let's accept that.

We'll live and love - together - without apologies.
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Tuesday, August 8, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: boyfriend,candy,humor,intimacy,parents,romance,shopping
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Bri Edwards 10 August 2023

(cont.) 'arousal' may need something/somebody else to aid arousal! ! : ) This, for me, was/is a delightful and both serious and humorous poem. Thanks. ***** stars. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 10 August 2023

'Viagra is an effective drug for treating male erectile dysfunction, but it targets sexual performance, not sexual arousal. There is limited evidence that Viagra may be beneficial for women with sexual dysfunction..'

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Bri Edwards 10 August 2023

VELCRO: 'Our story begins with the invention of the Original VELCRO® Brand hook and loop fastener more than 60 years ago. This invention has gone on to transform the world one strip at a time and continues to inspire us today' : )

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Bri Edwards 10 August 2023

I'm thinking that 'sitting on the toilet', or 'standing in front of it' for that matter, would be about the most 'uncomfortable' situation if duct tape were used to promote forever-closeness! ! bri ;) THINK ABOUT IT.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 August 2023

'To savour the vivid, fleeting intimacy' - nice, loved it.

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