Close Call Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis
Close Call
I may not go down in history
I just want someone to remember me
Not perfect, heroic, or full of glory
I just want to be able to share my story.
Talkin' bout redemption, leavin' it all behind
Wonderin' when I'm gone will my heart's
Intent be something you find.
Page for page, dreams washed away
Orchestrated paradise couldn't make me stay
Never fails when we're ill
We contemplate, in this hand we've been dealt,
Are we holdin' the broken seal
Is our name on the infamous scroll
Was that the wind or His hand we just felt.
As a tear falls for heaven's sake
You sense the fear from within
Gently kiss my forehead and grab my hand
Scared outta your mind
Wonderin' just how much more I can take.
Squeezin' my hand, afrain it may break
Just when you thought you lost me
I gently squeeze back and then you see
Just how truly happy you've made me.
There's hope afterall,
You suddenly feel faint
Who's gonna catch you if you fall
You step out into the hall
Cath your breath and go for help
An hour later, eyes open
Yes baby, it's true ~ just as you were hopin'
I touched your face
With every beat my heart stays at a steady pace
I trace the outline of your lips
As you gently kiss my finger tips.
The nurse comes in ~ 'You both look as white as a sheet! ' She said
'Keep this up girl and you'll soon be outta that bed! '
Love. love. love love love and more love Kristin. You had me worried there for a minute! lol You just keep concentrating on all that love and getting better. The Title was a bit in the circumstances, what ya trying to do kill us oldies off with heart failure? lol Hospitals in fact, can be very arousing places! I don't know if you have ever seen a Carry On Film. British comedy at it's roarist! ! ! best.lol A you know nurses have an open mind when it comes to body language, well in Britain anyway, Well according to the latest british sit coms anyway. Excellent we are in this media form. Anyway, not too much nookie and get better soon. Excellent poem again. Smiling at you, Tai
I'M TELLIN YOU MY DEAR, THERE IS A NOVEL IN THIS WHEN YOU ARE INEVITABLLY UP & RUNNING...NEED AN AGENT? NOT A PROBLEM I CAN'T FIX FOR YA, MISS CLIENT...LOL.... GREAT WRITE KRIS, QUITE INTENSE IN FACT, BUT OF COURSE W/ THE ONLY ENDING YOU'D ACCEPT, AND THATS ON ITS WAY TO YOU! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
My Husbands been there too Kristin, and still fighting, but is oh so very positive, hang in there and you will land back on solid ground with a new life found. Wonderful poem, I'm with you all the way. You are in my prayers, with love and hugs Ernestine XXX
`you are writing history...on PH...kristin...all of us are...with every poem we write...all on PH are with you to give you all the strength you need...let that strength flow to you...love...nalini
Yes Kristin, soon out of bed! ! ! these are good words take them to heart darling Love dave xxxx
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9/23/2024 5:17:22 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Aww I just love this ending Kristin. Hospitals are not a very romantic place, are they? (Giggle) . Thanx for sharing Kristin. Barbara