Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Close Your I's And See Perfection Comments

Rating: 4.5

lean back breathe out the past
take in anew a big strong blast

feel what's perfect right here, now feel
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Chuy Amante
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2015

peg your happiness on breathing..This will help to realize more about life. Wonderfully penned wise poem shared really. Wise sharing...10

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Kelly Kurt 10 November 2015

It seems quite illogical to bank happiness for a day that may never come. Good write

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M Asim Nehal 10 November 2015

Magical poem on happiness........Loved it.

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