Closed Circuit Poem by Sandra Feldman

Closed Circuit



Sadness slumbers in the wake
Of nothingness,
Shadows crawl along the walls
Of past incense,
Each day succeeds one another
Leaving no print, no memory
Just emptiness.

Sunday, June 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: despondent,feeling
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Lodigiana Poetess 09 June 2019

My goodness what a wonderfully descriptive and emotive piece this is...you have depicted the empiness and sadness with such clarity....a very sad but brilliantly worded piece! Lodigiana x

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 June 2019

This is a brilliant poem on despondent and feeling having an impressive inscription. I appreciate the title of the poem. Thanks for sharing this gem with us.

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