Closeness Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Closeness

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Hello and little smile brings us so close
Reddishness on cheeks and ready for pose
Exchange of promises and trust to repose
All on sound basis and nothing to suppose

Relation mushroom with development of intimacy
It is genuine feeling and doesn’t involve hypocrisy
How best to die for each other is order of the day
Search for genuine relationship in honourable way

It is not limited or confined to gender feeling
Relation is built up purely on honest dealing
What matters more is utmost will and good faith
Slight compromise leads to break up or death

It is unbearable pain when comes separation
It doesn’t matter or count what the duration (was)
Life doesn’t end with break up, failure or sordid affair
It has happy ending with means always fair

If you have resolve to sail in rough weather
Adding sweetness and glory to your feather
Nobody can storm or vitiate the relation
Life is full of joy with happiness and sensation

To cast doubt means end of cordiality
Halt in warmth relation and start of hostility
Hurling of abuses and accusing to each other
May sour the relation with more to bother

Closeness may add to strengthening the bond
New intimate relation and better relation fond
Better understanding to over come and excel in field
Complement to each other not to course or yield

Lovely life is reflected in every mode or corner
Flame is coming out clean and bright from burner
What actually you need is sincere cleansing
Presentation of real show without any mincing

Not hollowness in action but holistic approach
Swing in action without any help from coach
May ultimately lead to and bring happiness
Intimacy is after all………………………..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2010

How best to die for each other is order of the day Search for genuine relationship in honourable way

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Louis Rams 18 January 2010

very good write on closeness

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Yacov Mitchenko 16 January 2010

Yes, closeness, honesty, and sincerity of feeling are the foundation of all good relationships. Thank you, sir.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 07 January 2010

'Lovely life is reflected in every mode or corner' this reminds me of the prose poem titled 'Desiderata' anyway, very good poem!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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