Rohit Sharma

Rookie - 8 Points (July 6,1984 / Amritsar, India)

Closer - Poem by Rohit Sharma

Let's come closer one more time
Closer enough to make this fine,
Making this night worth remember
Sharing love with total surrender....

Come closer to me and make this true
Closer enough to love me all night through.
Hugging each other with our love so bright
Making this our very special night....

Come closer to me in my arms
Closer enough to feel the warmth,
Soft and gentle kisses all around
Loving each other without any bound....

Come closer to see how much I mean
Closer enough like you never have been,
To feel how much I feel for you
To love me the way I love you....

Let me come closer one more time
Closer enough to make you mine,
Making this moment worth remember
Sharing love with warmth and tender! ! !


Comments about Closer by Rohit Sharma

  • (8/24/2010 12:31:00 AM)


    Rohit, I am spellbound by the simple langauage. Any one with little knowledge of English will understand your creativity and the emotions behind it. I am reading all your poems one by one you deserve 10+ (Report) Reply

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  • (7/23/2010 3:18:00 AM)


    ‘Making this night worth remember
    Sharing love with total surrender.’ ~ Wow…the take off is jocund …I hope poet like you will keep up Closer always never make it ‘Closure’…. Enjoyed the vibe in full length… thanks sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2010 9:35:00 PM)


    Let's come closer one more time
    Closer enough to make this fine,
    Making this night worth remember
    Sharing love with total surrender...... closeness removes many misgivings....10
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  • (7/3/2010 1:05:00 AM)


    very expressive..nicely done (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2010 11:41:00 AM)


    what a start and proper flow........ i got in love with this poem of yours......... Really touched my deep core............. (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2010 10:27:00 AM)


    OH
    it touched me
    keep writing...
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  • (6/18/2010 9:50:00 AM)


    This poem write felt so warm, encompassing and altogether right! Loved it! ; D (Report) Reply

  • Gita Ashok (6/11/2010 2:38:00 AM)


    I like the repetitive effect created by the similarities and subtle differences of the first and last stanzas. Good job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 23, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011


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