Closing Years Poem by Rani Turton

Closing Years

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In these closing years of your life
Each time I see your white hair that was once so black
Your body bent that once walked so straight
I remember you throwing me up in your arms
And waiting for you impatiently at the gate

Let time quietly glide away
And grace touch every moment that is left
Never to know distress, worry, stress
And when you close your eyes to rest one day
It might be to the sound of familiar footsteps I guess
That you can follow without any fear in your heart;
And to the sound of soft beloved voices,
Maybe that is the way loved ones depart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Wiley 19 June 2008

May your father's final moments be blessed. Kate

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 June 2008

And grace touch every moment that is left Never to know distress, worry, stress And when you close your eyes to rest one day the inharitance of love as flows all along the resonance when cradles the the soul grace when felt in the ripples of blood that flays the tears from the core of the heart being away.....................wonderful exaltation of filial love impeccable and the glory when blazed without distinction of time and space where ever we are, we sing the songs of our whole being by the genesis of self portrayal, yet poignant, tears gleans in the eyes as we remember the love of halcyon days hanging on the arms of father, the golden arms when mingled in the self rhythm.memoirs stiill dazzles the glory of love ingenious, great write,10++, thanks for sharing

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Shirley Anne Alexander 12 June 2008

This is a lovely tribute. I've added it to my favorites. I was close to my father too. (((hugs))) Shirley

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Ron Flowers 09 June 2008

Rani, this is a very touching poem from the heart.

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Vidi Writes 06 May 2008

Death a Preacher Teaches the 'Value of Loss' At the same time, reminds 'Value of Life'.

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Ron Flowers 19 August 2008

Beautifully expressed, Rani. Ron

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Subham Dutta 07 August 2008

Dear Rani Turton, The sense of your poem is very good.

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Kevin Wells 29 July 2008

Heart-felt...absolutely beautiful.

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Colin Jeffery 15 July 2008

A really great poem.

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

An incredibly strong and emotional poem

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