Clouds Poem by rinki nandy

Clouds

Rating: 5.0


Clouds

My magic carpet, light and strong....
you never...never let me fall,
found comfort in your lap,
in your presence i feel no gap,
like soft cotton balls you look,
a cotton candy which i took,
like a loner you fly alone,
no care, no game and no home,
are you angry or blushing? ,
i see the different colors you are bearing,
some ashy, some orange and some bluey,
pretty you look and handsome too,
have my eyes gluey.
Take me to a different place today,
fly away with you to a beautiful day,
take me away from their vision,
bring me to another horizon,
.......let me taste the dew drops as poison,
smile like a kid with no rhyme or reason,
give this emptiness a competition.
Sky is incomplete and empty without your glow,
bless my eyes.....defeat the sky as you grow,
cover the planet with your show.

Monday, February 15, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: planet,candy,emptiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bursting with beauty. This is cloud theraphy my friend. Well done! 10/10

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Magic Carpet Magic Imagination Magic…all streamlined beautifully ‘Sky is incomplete and empty without your glow, ’ yeah like Bride-Queen…without cloud sky will shower sterile smile … 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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