Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Cloudy Thoughts - Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

At times I feel
Thoughts are clouds
That gather instantly
In the sky of life.

Vision is obscured
Clarity gets blurred
Thunderous feelings roar
Memories keep flashing.

Clouds of thoughts
Move away leaving
Emptiness so bright
Mind's eye blinks.

Hope the final state
Reached will lead
To some fresh ideas
To steer life ahead.

Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts

Comments about Cloudy Thoughts by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

  • Savita Tyagi (12/5/2015 12:59:00 PM)

    Wonderful metaphor. Enjoyed the poem and last lines of optimism very much. (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (11/22/2015 6:36:00 AM)

    comparison of thoughts with that of cloud is more appropriate. Both have the same functions. +++++10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/8/2015 3:17:00 AM)

    This is a brilliant metaphor and you expressed it so well through your poems. Amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/7/2015 8:28:00 PM)

    A Very striking presentation of a mental state when thoughts cloud around and vision is obscured! Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Musawir Raakh (11/7/2015 5:33:00 PM)

    Indeed, that's a true picture of what it is, we do hope that we may get the clear picture so that we may write the best stuff, good 1 dear, I invite you to read and rate mine. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 4:39:00 PM)

    Wonderful feeling you have shared here. Like clouds, thoughts become too cloudy to make rain of emotion in wonderful poems. Clarity of memories keep on flashing reaching life ahead. A fantastic poem shared here. Very wise and nice sharing...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 7, 2015

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