COCONUT TREE
We had the last little, cute brother;
The sunshine of the family in the center!
He was born before the horror of war;
The blessed child of father and mother!
Amid his birth, my mother went in coma;
After 7 days, she woke up from that trauma!
In those days, teachers were child beaters, bad;
Daddy wanted safety for his toddler lad.
I often said to daddy, send him to school dad;
Now I know, his little kid was his so beloved!
In my repeated urges, my dad looked sad;
He wanted his kid around his arms so bad!
Once, I hurriedly rescued my little brother;
He was sinking and couldn't breathe in that water.
Mom used to be worried for our outside safety;
She kept waiting for us under the coconut tree!
Once, I hurriedly rescued my little brother;
He was sinking and couldn't breathe in that water.
That incident to endanger my brother is in memory;
He could have died then and I still feel very guilty, so sorry!
By Chan Mongol
December 18 of 2022
True accident, now this incident is in memory, but YOU have kept him alive and that is a very very powerful action, you risked your life for him, in their thoughts your parents are very thankful to you, dear Chan.
A lovely sentimental poem about your little brother and memories with him. Kudos!
Some memories would hurt. But only, the sincere minds. Nice write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks to you, the benjamin is still alive, my applause for your way of creating the poem, a very pleasant read.5 Stars Top Score!