Coconut Tree Poem by Chan Mongol

Coconut Tree

Rating: 5.0


COCONUT TREE


We had the last little, cute brother;

The sunshine of the family in the center!

He was born before the horror of war;

The blessed child of father and mother!

Amid his birth, my mother went in coma;

After 7 days, she woke up from that trauma!

In those days, teachers were child beaters, bad;

Daddy wanted safety for his toddler lad.

I often said to daddy, send him to school dad;

Now I know, his little kid was his so beloved!

In my repeated urges, my dad looked sad;

He wanted his kid around his arms so bad!

Once, I hurriedly rescued my little brother;

He was sinking and couldn't breathe in that water.

Mom used to be worried for our outside safety;

She kept waiting for us under the coconut tree!

Once, I hurriedly rescued my little brother;

He was sinking and couldn't breathe in that water.

That incident to endanger my brother is in memory;

He could have died then and I still feel very guilty, so sorry!


By Chan Mongol
December 18 of 2022

Sunday, December 18, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: brother,dad,toddler
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 19 December 2022

Thanks to you, the benjamin is still alive, my applause for your way of creating the poem, a very pleasant read.5 Stars Top Score!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 December 2022

True accident, now this incident is in memory, but YOU have kept him alive and that is a very very powerful action, you risked your life for him, in their thoughts your parents are very thankful to you, dear Chan.

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s.zaynab kamoonpury 19 December 2022

A lovely sentimental poem about your little brother and memories with him. Kudos!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 19 December 2022

Some memories would hurt. But only, the sincere minds. Nice write

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