Chan Mongol


The Sun Is The Zero - Poem by Chan Mongol

He gives no pressure on us
No demand for prayers.
Never makes us nervous
He is the holy, virtuous.
Seasons and the life maker
Energizing as the creator.
Restlessly, day and night
Here, there making bright.
Beyond the imagination
The reason for creation.
For all in earth, air, water
He is the only one creator.
The truth, we must not hide
Nature changes in Sun's guide.
Rest unseen is unnecessary
May be after the obituary!
But we know what is then
With body, what can happen?
Decomposed body, back to soil
Recycling system, nothing spoil!
None gets back same figure
Only ingredients in nature.
Within the system of the Sun
Life recycles in cyclic turn.
Sun is round like a zero, a wheel
Life from zero to zero, as I feel.
This zero is the undeniable source
For conditions and life to enforce.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, sun


Comments about The Sun Is The Zero by Chan Mongol

  • Ans Maria Xavier (5/10/2019 10:50:00 PM)

    A poem bright like a sun (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (4/4/2019 10:37:00 PM)

    The equation Sun and the cycle of life on the planets including Earth logically formulated and nicely presented. I would like to quote:
    Within the system of the Sun
    Life recycles in cyclic turn.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/4/2019 1:42:00 PM)

    Seasons and the life maker! ! ! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:02:00 PM)

    Warm welcome to my good old academic friend Edward Kofi Louis.

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  • Ramesh T A (4/4/2019 1:15:00 PM)

    Yes, Sun is zero and other planets are in numbers 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 and 9! That is why Arithmetical numbers are between 0 and 9! (Report)Reply

    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 1:57:00 PM)

    Yes sir! That's what it is! I appreciate your enlightenment in this matter.

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  • (4/4/2019 11:33:00 AM)

    Magnifying the power of zero! Chan engages upon the whole life cycle, creation, and reincarnation, the recycling of the soul through the soil, through the earth, through the great zero. Making something great of zero- a real accomplishment. (Report)Reply

    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:00:00 PM)

    Your review is also with full of enlightenment. I cordially thank you for the solidarity of yours.

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  • Adrian Flett (4/4/2019 10:07:00 AM)

    'The truth can't be hide' This line jars as it should read The truth can't be hid. Then it doesn't rhyme. (Report)Reply

    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:05:00 PM)

    You have the powerful observation. I thank you for your support. In poems, it is not easy to maintain grammar always. Hehehehe....Thank you Adrian Flett.

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  • Bharati Nayak (4/4/2019 9:44:00 AM)

    Sun is round like a zero, a wheel
    Life from zero to zero, as I feel.
    This zero is the undeniable source
    For conditions and life to enforce.
    - - - - - -What a beautiful poem about Sun- -the source of energy- - - the cause and sustainer of life .
    Congratulations for being selected Poet of the Day.
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    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:09:00 PM)

    Dear poet Bharati Nayak, your inspirational comment is a big thing for me. I am glad that I could cater the poem for talented people like you. Thanks.

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  • Savita Tyagi (4/4/2019 8:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Sun is center of all life. Whatever powers that Sun powers us. Congratulations for a well written poem of the day. (Report)Reply

    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:13:00 PM)

    In good old Sanskrit, it is NOMO JOVA KUSUM: SANG KASSO PIONG: MOHA DHUTING.... Thank you for your fine comment.

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  • (4/4/2019 8:46:00 AM)

    The genesis of life cycle kick started by the Sun, who is the creator, has been wonderfully unfolded. Well deserved poem of the Day. Heartiest Congratulations. (Report)Reply

    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:16:00 PM)

    Dear poet, I thank you very much for your citation of Genesis. I appreciate your support for my words. Stay blessed!

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  • (4/4/2019 7:50:00 AM)

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  • (4/4/2019 7:50:00 AM)

    I must give my thanks to LUKE MEREDITH, who posted here last week comment aBout system she uses to earn online… I’ve got my FIRST check total of $55o, pretty cool. I am so exicted, this is the first time I actually earned something. I am going to work even harder new and I can’t wait for next week payment. You can try it for yourself. …./../

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  • (4/4/2019 7:28:00 AM)

    Within the system of the Sun Life recycles in cyclic turn .Yes. The power and purpose of the sun is obvious. Congrats (Report)Reply

    (4/4/2019 2:20:00 PM)

    Thank you so much for your attention. I attempted to bring up a little meaning of the wheel, the ASHOK CHOKRO. Your comment is very important for me.

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  • (4/4/2019 3:49:00 AM)

    The greatest creation for all source of energy. Sun is the brightest light. (Report)Reply

    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:24:00 PM)

    Dear poet, your comment bears more lights beyond the mighty Sun. I hope to get capacities to reach there. And I am trying.

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (4/4/2019 2:03:00 AM)

    SUN us sun;
    without any demand
    He serves with great heart

    He doesn't need any prayer
    He doesn't need any worshiper

    from the ZERO
    He is mercy to everyone.....! ! /// wonderful expression
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    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:30:00 PM)

    Dear sir, Your review is very powerful to empower. I appreciate your footsteps in my domain. But due to the fact that I became a legally blind man, I just couldn't return your favor and support for me. I zoom characters and notice that you are a noble reviewer. Please accept my humble appreciation for your excellent comments over and over. I will remain grateful.

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/4/2019 12:31:00 AM)

    Marvelous poem of the day, sir Chan.
    Congrats for being chosen....10++++++
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    Chan Mongol(4/4/2019 2:34:00 PM)

    Dear much regarded holy friend. Your kindness and politeness always give me joy to move on. Your attention to my words encourage and inspire me a lot. You are an enlightened man. Stay more blessed!

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 3, 2019

Poem Edited: Friday, April 5, 2019


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