He gives no pressure on us
No demand for prayers.
Never makes us nervous
He is the holy, virtuous.
Seasons and the life maker
Energizing as the creator.
Restlessly, day and night
Here, there making bright.
Beyond the imagination
The reason for creation.
For all in earth, air, water
He is the only one creator.
The truth, we must not hide
Nature changes in Sun's guide.
Rest unseen is unnecessary
May be after the obituary!
But we know what is then
With body, what can happen?
Decomposed body, back to soil
Recycling system, nothing spoil!
None gets back same figure
Only ingredients in nature.
Within the system of the Sun
Life recycles in cyclic turn.
Sun is round like a zero, a wheel
Life from zero to zero, as I feel.
This zero is the undeniable source
For conditions and life to enforce.
Within the system of the Sun Life recycles in cyclic turn .Yes. The power and purpose of the sun is obvious. Congrats
Thank you so much for your attention. I attempted to bring up a little meaning of the wheel, the ASHOK CHOKRO. Your comment is very important for me.
The greatest creation for all source of energy. Sun is the brightest light.
Yes, the cycle reminds me of reincarnation, where we have all been recycled. And from beginning to end is representative of traveling 360 degress (a zero) . I wrote a poem on this once. Congratulations on poem of the day. Great poem. : -)
Sun is round like a zero, a wheel Life from zero to zero, as I feel. This zero is the undeniable source For conditions and life to enforce. great poem. imagination, creation, system of the sun, life recycles in cyclic turn. tony
The sun is zero The earth is zero The solar system is zero From zero the zeros took birth A dot is now disclosed as the living world
Excellent poem chosen for then second time. Twice chosen, best woven. Same date last year and today. Hooray! Such a greatest pleasure to read this treat, Chan as written here as a response by Sylvia Frances Chan CONGRATULATIONS for this honour, Chan! A 10 Full Score.
Esteemed poets have interpreted this brilliant poem in different dimensions but my poetic eyes just look that powerful luminous round! A great work! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being selected as Poem of the Day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Magnifying the power of zero! Chan engages upon the whole life cycle, creation, and reincarnation, the recycling of the soul through the soil, through the earth, through the great zero. Making something great of zero- a real accomplishment.
Your review is also with full of enlightenment. I cordially thank you for the solidarity of yours.