Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Cold Metal Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cold autumn breeze feels good for the first minute
After that it's cold bloody wind chills me to the bone
Cold metal through my skin makes me numb
I can't feel my feet or my fingertips
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G J Salgado
COMMENTS
Bill Cantrell 24 October 2017

Oh I hate winter! ! Cold heartless metal is a great description, I certainly agree, good meter

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Gianna Jett 24 January 2018

Thank you! I hate winter weather and knowing the beautiful autumn is coming to an end as the harsh winter begins.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2017

Cold autumn breeze gives amazing cold feeling at first moment. This is a brilliant poem wisely penned and shared...10

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Gianna Jett 24 January 2018

Thank you! Comparison of how the autumn leaves us and the winter approaches.

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