πŸ’˜ Come πŸ’˜ Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

πŸ’˜ Come πŸ’˜

Rating: 5.0


When the moon is full you can you not come?

Can you not like the petals out stretched,
come at the stroke of midnight.

Life is to short too stand off in the
Distance, high in the sky like the clouds.

And together to soon tonight will be gone,
like a wave on the beach that is lost.

πŸ’˜ Come πŸ’˜
Sunday, September 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 22 September 2019

A brilliant short work! Fabulous use of simile......... beautifully composed......10

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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