Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 99,616 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Come On Dear Clouds - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

It’s too hot, could you come as a rainy spout!
The heat inside now shrieks for outing,
The music of steps I can feel, I breathe-in you,
And what I inhale is shivering my body,
I know you are dancing somewhere very close,
Humid air that is wet, murmuring a song,
A lyric that is sung after meeting the beloved
Although I can listen to your slow heart beats,
But now I want a thunder of passion,
Lightning of sex that excites someone,
She is still sleeping in a tiring noon,
Shake her up and wake her up,
Inspire me to sing, and excite her to dance,
I want to see your show of romance,
See the smile that will follow the cries,
Come on dear clouds and capture the skies.

Topic(s) of this poem: rainy season

Form: Ode


Comments about Come On Dear Clouds by Akhtar Jawad

  • Cigeng Zhang (4/1/2015 10:11:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem.A poet always wonders what lies beyond the clouds. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/29/2015 6:58:00 AM)


    An amazing poem................................10 (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (3/26/2015 9:15:00 AM)


    A stunning write full of passion as you wait for the beloved rain to release the tension of the humidity that drains your heart and soul! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (3/26/2015 1:33:00 AM)


    Yes, it is too hot and humid! We all look for the rain! It is lurching some where close, but stays eluding like a shy lover! Let it thunder down with passion! I agree with Mark.... great metaphor! (Report) Reply

  • Mark Heathcote (3/25/2015 9:46:00 PM)


    I love metaphor it deserves more than one read so I read it 3 times lovely. (Report) Reply

  • (3/25/2015 4:50:00 PM)


    Sweet, very sweet poem.................10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 25, 2015



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