Committed Poem by Alicia Patti

Committed

Rating: 5.0


Why did Nurse Ratched think
she had dibs on all the nuts in the bag?
The little power she enjoyed pushed her
over the edge. I was there, I know:
brooding over maniacal technicians presiding
over the hopelessly deluded, passing out their
pitiful pacifiers. But not me. NO!
I was completely sane.

Endogenous depression, they said,
is all in the head:
'Who is the President of the United States?
Interpret Early to bed and early to rise...
How about a stitch in time
saves nine? '

I knew the answers, of course -
but then came the shock treatments...

I was cured, they said,
when they let me go.

Saturday, February 3, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: answers,depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paula Robinson 11 February 2007

Fabulous Alicia! Sounds very much like the story of my life...although believing that you're sane doesn't always make it so! ; -) Paula x

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Jerry Hughes 08 February 2007

...any wonder it was called a cuckoo's nest, in Australia she was know as Nurse Ratshit

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David Harris 04 February 2007

Alicia, I like this and could certainly relate to the Nurse Ratchetts of this world. I've had my depressive moments, through bereavement, writer's block as they call it and simple stress. Luckily I didn't need the shock treatments to come out it. Great poem and thanks for sharing it. David

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