Committed Poem by Brandi Guthrie

Committed

Rating: 5.0


Death and it`s definitive end,
The closing down of love and pain.
I dream of this unfocused mend,
A release of an undeserving bane.
Repeated nightmare, it suffocates,
It`s been breaking me to the floor.
A life depleted, I`ll supplicate
And to this empty room, I implore.
Uselessness has me tied,
Wrists cut red with blood.
An unwashable filth inside.
So soon this suffering is done.
Beauty hides her eyes from me.
No splendor holds more true,
Than what secrets I must keep.
I now know what I must do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kimberly Hilliker 07 November 2010

Well written poem about a horrific state. Keep on keeping on, Brandi. Find help for yourself, so life isn't so painful. Read my poem 'Unanswered Cry, ' you might appreciate the content. It's a plea for help too. Best of luck to you!

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