Annie Juliet

Freshman - 996 Points (11-06-1987 / India)

'Cry Of A Kid' - Poem by Annie Juliet

Before I raise
you get ready;
Before my School bus arrives
you leave to office leaving my lunch box;
Before I reach home
you call baby sitter, instruct to help me;
I am so tired of hearing your voice over
mobile;
I some time wish, why wont I be
this baby sitter's child;
Before you come home
I sleep Off;
Again
Before I raise
you are ready to flee away.....
You are so happy about my achievement
boost before every one 'that is my child! ! ! ! '
When will you be achieve my love for me to
boost 'That's my BEST MOM'

I m Missing you mumma! ! ! !

Topic(s) of this poem: family


Comments about 'Cry Of A Kid' by Annie Juliet

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/18/2017 6:17:00 AM)


    A very impressive poem the reader feels this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (3/29/2017 4:02:00 AM)


    This is very common these days that the working parents have no time for their young children but they miss their mothers more than anybody else in the family, leave aside a baby sitter. You have rightly pointed out: : ....I some time wish, why wont I be / this baby sitter's child; (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (3/1/2016 1:42:00 PM)


    You are so happy about my achievement
    boost before every one 'that is my child! ! ! ! '
    When will you be achieve my love for me to
    boost 'That's my BEST MOM'
    it is the reality of modern life when the parents are busy making money. thank you for writing about such a theme. tony
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  • V P Mahur (3/7/2014 2:51:00 AM)


    Dear Annie
    Sweet feels of a baby
    this the doom of so many children in the modern world.
    I invite you to read my poems and give your views
    Thanks!
    (Report) Reply

  • Aditi Khandelwal (7/27/2012 11:44:00 AM)


    Good poem... there are some typing errors if you correct it the poem will be great....
    Really nice poem..
    Aditi
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  • (6/6/2012 5:20:00 AM)


    There is pain, obligation and sustained feeling of quest of love in the poem............good one! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2009 6:10:00 AM)


    a good tribute for the mother....a substantial one....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 5, 2014


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