Concrete Angel Poem by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

Concrete Angel

Rating: 5.0


yeah im a concrete angel,
so fuckin what!
its only cause of the unwanted touches,
that i so regularly got...

the way he touched,
and the way he lied,
nearly resulted,
in his own daughters suicide...

not saying i don't feel the same way now,
because i most certainly do,
its just i've gotten better at hiding,
the pain and the cuts from you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I really love it! Especially the last lines!

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Silence Dogood 12 October 2008

Great emotion nice write

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Bless Villena 19 March 2008

you are good at expressing yourself

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