Control Poem by Reggie fambro mcclain III

Control

Rating: 5.0


Controlling
Abusing,
Using
That’s all they ever do to me
Always hurting never helping
Waiting Intel that moment
When I brake and destroy them all
Then laugh as i'm taken away to those cruel cages of steel
Where they will torment me until I lash out at them too
For I am destined to concur
Concur them all and rule the world then darkness shall control and there will be no more…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 18 April 2007

hmm so much pain you need a heart try to heal you have come so far

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Xanadu Trevino 29 June 2007

I like this poem. it is a very storng poem Very good. -Xanadu-

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immortal Butterfly 20 March 2009

Wow that was good. I love the darkness.

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Amanda Ford 16 March 2009

wow i can totally relate to this: D hehe good memories lol

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Eyan Desir 17 February 2009

IT WAS FUN TO READ I LIKED IT

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Angel of Darkness 21 November 2007

I totally know what your going through, and I assume it's your parents that are trying to change you? ? or everybody else? ? Don't let them get to you, people reject the unfamiliar and different. You're one-of-a-kind don't change and keep writing. XOXO, Kolee

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Saxyn Schaffer 20 November 2007

very good i liked that keep up the good work i know how you feel ive been threw it before they try to change you because your soo much different believe me im going threw it right now it will get beter sooner or later xxsaxynxx

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