Reggie fambro mcclain III

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Control - Poem by Reggie fambro mcclain III

Controlling
Abusing,
Using
That’s all they ever do to me
Always hurting never helping
Waiting Intel that moment
When I brake and destroy them all
Then laugh as i'm taken away to those cruel cages of steel
Where they will torment me until I lash out at them too
For I am destined to concur
Concur them all and rule the world then darkness shall control and there will be no more…


Comments about Control by Reggie fambro mcclain III

  • (3/20/2009 3:08:00 PM)

    Wow that was good. I love the darkness. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/16/2009 2:28:00 PM)

    wow i can totally relate to this: D
    hehe good memories lol
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  • (2/17/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    IT WAS
    FUN TO READ
    I LIKED IT
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  • (3/3/2008 10:38:00 AM)

    damn...i love it...i can relate...can't wait to read more! ! !
    Seb
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  • (11/21/2007 8:28:00 AM)

    I totally know what your going through, and I assume it's your parents that are trying to change you? ? or everybody else? ? Don't let them get to you, people reject the unfamiliar and different. You're one-of-a-kind don't change and keep writing.

    XOXO,
    Kolee
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  • (11/20/2007 10:42:00 AM)

    very good
    i liked that
    keep up the good work
    i know how you feel
    ive been threw it before
    they try to change you because your soo much different
    believe me im going threw it right now
    it will get beter sooner or later

    xxsaxynxx
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  • (6/29/2007 5:21:00 PM)

    I like this poem. it is a very storng poem
    Very good.
    -Xanadu-
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  • (4/18/2007 11:02:00 AM)

    hmm so much pain you need a heart try to heal you have come so far (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 15, 2011


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