Controlled Addiction? Poem by Linda I. Weischedel

Controlled Addiction?



Pop a pill,
now you plan to chill,
popping that pill patiently waiting for the noted thrill,
popped that pill you ain't feeling so good
your feeling ill,
is this heavy pill supposed to relax you
and help you remain still?

Now I know you truly are unable to stop,
if you don't pop these pills you claim you are going to drop,
I guess you will never see that you honestly do need help
because you have yet to stop!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simon Stuart Gray 02 January 2008

Very sharp Linda, Like any adiction often the victim is too blind to see what is happenning. Best wishes Simon

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