Conversations With Space Poem by c...sdb kind

Conversations With Space

Rating: 3.5


I am just hanging on to the tail of a beast, not the head of the demon.
Choice has only given me two options
I want to let go, , I do,
I speak to the walls around me; I tell them who I am
I know they have a master; one they don’t question.
I want to be still with peace, , I do
I am trying to catch the tail of an angel
She keeps running,
I keep slipping.
The smell of white powder hunts me as I sleep
It makes me run with no choice, ,
What do I tell the walls, how to I explain my faults
If space is only imagination
And words keep changing
And thoughts have 2 meanings
And dark is light and light is dark
And wisdom is not, if not for love
And love is not, if not for fear
And fear is only from wisdom.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Pruchnicki 25 May 2008

Mind stirring indeed! Mind boggling is closer to the mark! Let us all join in the kool, mannnnn! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 May 2008

the power to communicate with space is obviosly an envious feats.......and you have achieved that.............virtually.hey this is kool mannnn...........i wanna join too.nice write indeed.

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Ted Sheridan 24 May 2008

Quite perplexing at times, our faith being called into question.

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