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Cosmic Order (Haiku)

Rating: 4.5

The sea call'd the wind;
The wind ruffled; the sea swell'd;
The cosmic order.

Cosmic Order (Haiku)
Wednesday, April 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: cosmology,natural law
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Somali Mukherjee 30 April 2020

Heartfelt thanks to all of you for your lovely comments.

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Kostas Lagos 29 April 2020

A brilliant haiku! Excellent!

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 April 2020

beautifully written the cosmic order//10+

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Vaibhav Simha 29 April 2020

This is a Haiku on a subject which is hardly talked of. Uniquely written. Only I'd say is that Haiku in itself is a contracted form of poetry, so I would much rather prefer " swelled" and " called" for even these have the same number of syllables. (Swell'd actually looks nice, though)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 April 2020

A truly wonderful haiku.......10++++

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