The sea call'd the wind;
The wind ruffled; the sea swell'd;
The cosmic order.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
Heartfelt thanks to all of you for your lovely comments.
A brilliant haiku! Excellent!
beautifully written the cosmic order//10+
This is a Haiku on a subject which is hardly talked of. Uniquely written. Only I'd say is that Haiku in itself is a contracted form of poetry, so I would much rather prefer " swelled" and " called" for even these have the same number of syllables. (Swell'd actually looks nice, though)
A truly wonderful haiku.......10++++
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