JoJo Bean


Could I Be Free Of Me Please - Poem by JoJo Bean

Could I be free of me please
This tired old body that doesn't work with ease
I'm not even 50 yet
But I feel more like a 80 year old vet

Could I be free of me please
A mind that tends to seize
Eyes that are fogging over
Everything works much slower

Could I be free of me please
And take with it the disease
I'm tired of the me I've become
And I have to live until I succumb


(23 June 2007)


Comments about Could I Be Free Of Me Please by JoJo Bean

  • (6/24/2007 5:59:00 AM)

    Frank said it so eloquently. Echo…echo… (Report) Reply

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  • (6/23/2007 5:46:00 PM)

    Beautiful poetry Joanne, and I do understsnd...if what does not kill us, makes us stronger...please believe that.

    Add a little Faith, Hope and Love to the mix, and a healing might be around your corner!
    Blessings,
    Theo
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/23/2007 5:15:00 PM)

    Jo Ann>>>An auto-bio poem NOT, is my hope here... But as far as quality goes...

    It's a grand slam young lady
    Who be quite far from eighty
    And is a fine friend and Poet
    As her Readers well know it!

    FjR
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/23/2007 5:14:00 PM)

    Jo Ann>>>An auto-bio poem NOT, is my hope here... But as far as quality goes...

    It's a grand slam young lady
    Who be quite far from eighty
    And is a fine friend and Poet
    As her Readers well know it!

    FjR
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2007 1:45:00 PM)

    Not your most cheerful poem JoAnn, but i understand why you feel so down lets hope your life will turn around... I will pray that it does..10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 15, 2011


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