Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 100,433 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Could I Be Redeemed - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Could I be redeemed,
From the effects of an environment...
That hides its dysfunctions,
In a colorized denial.
Could I be redeemd,
To become rehabilitated...
Without the climate fixed with facts.

Could I be redeemed,
To satisfy book readers...
Seeking for a perfit fit,
With chapters to re-read...
And passages highted to glow,
With words underlined,
And maybe copies to print.

Could I be redeemed,
From the effects of an environment...
That hides its dysfunctions,
In a colorized denial.
Or do I sit,
To analyze the purpose behind it.

Could redeemed?
In colorized denial...
Or do I sit,
To analyze the purpose behind it.

Could I be redeemed,
From the effects of an environment...
That hides its dysfunctions,
Or do I sit,
And wait for GOD to handle it?


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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 11, 2013


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