john hardesty

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Creation Of Haiku - Poem by john hardesty

There is no brilliance
in creating one Haiku
my dog composed this.


Comments about Creation Of Haiku by john hardesty

  • John Hardesty (8/30/2013 6:55:00 PM)


    Miss Adeline, the poem is a form of Haiku(5-7-5) , I don't know what poem you were reading but this is a form of Haiku, syllables in the first line 5, second line 7, third line 5, but you obviously can't count nor read, and I personally hate Haikus, they're a joke, a lost and I hope forgotten poetry! Those who criticize should start with themselves! (Report) Reply

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  • Adeline Foster (8/28/2013 3:19:00 PM)


    'Tis cute, though it is however not a haiku. Perhaps you could now sit him up to the blackboard and teach him the 5-7-5 syllable rule for good haiku, and I'm sure he will quickly grasp the need for the seasonal requirement. Then read him some real haiku, that should do the trick.
    Adeline
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  • Heather Wilkins (8/12/2013 5:00:00 PM)


    ha ha I like this one a very smart doggie (Report) Reply

  • John Hardesty (7/15/2013 1:11:00 PM)


    T: Is it Poetry Many believe there's some great powerful art in writing Haiku! ! Personally, I can write them in 5 seconds, making a pun that my dog could even create one, got it, is that complicated? (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry James Mclain (7/15/2013 1:01:00 PM)


    Of dogs we speak
    It's not as if we ideally
    were speaking of God.......iip
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013


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