There is no brilliance
in creating one Haiku
my dog composed this.
Of dogs we speak
It's not as if we ideally
were speaking of God.......iip
A concise and insightful verse well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction.
Miss Adeline, the poem is a form of Haiku(5-7-5) , I don't know what poem you were reading but this is a form of Haiku, syllables in the first line 5, second line 7, third line 5, but you obviously can't count nor read, and I personally hate Haikus, they're a joke, a lost and I hope forgotten poetry! Those who criticize should start with themselves!
'Tis cute, though it is however not a haiku. Perhaps you could now sit him up to the blackboard and teach him the 5-7-5 syllable rule for good haiku, and I'm sure he will quickly grasp the need for the seasonal requirement. Then read him some real haiku, that should do the trick.
ha ha I like this one a very smart doggie
T: Is it Poetry Many believe there's some great powerful art in writing Haiku! ! Personally, I can write them in 5 seconds, making a pun that my dog could even create one, got it, is that complicated?
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