There is no brilliance
in creating one Haiku
my dog composed this.
A concise and insightful verse well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction.
Miss Adeline, the poem is a form of Haiku(5-7-5) , I don't know what poem you were reading but this is a form of Haiku, syllables in the first line 5, second line 7, third line 5, but you obviously can't count nor read, and I personally hate Haikus, they're a joke, a lost and I hope forgotten poetry! Those who criticize should start with themselves!
'Tis cute, though it is however not a haiku. Perhaps you could now sit him up to the blackboard and teach him the 5-7-5 syllable rule for good haiku, and I'm sure he will quickly grasp the need for the seasonal requirement. Then read him some real haiku, that should do the trick. Adeline
T: Is it Poetry Many believe there's some great powerful art in writing Haiku! ! Personally, I can write them in 5 seconds, making a pun that my dog could even create one, got it, is that complicated?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Of dogs we speak It's not as if we ideally were speaking of God.......iip