Creation Of Haiku Poem by john hardesty

Creation Of Haiku

Rating: 5.0

There is no brilliance
in creating one Haiku
my dog composed this.

James Mclain 15 July 2013

Of dogs we speak It's not as if we ideally were speaking of God.......iip

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Chinedu Dike 19 October 2019

A concise and insightful verse well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction.

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John Hardesty 30 August 2013

Miss Adeline, the poem is a form of Haiku(5-7-5) , I don't know what poem you were reading but this is a form of Haiku, syllables in the first line 5, second line 7, third line 5, but you obviously can't count nor read, and I personally hate Haikus, they're a joke, a lost and I hope forgotten poetry! Those who criticize should start with themselves!

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Adeline Foster 28 August 2013

'Tis cute, though it is however not a haiku. Perhaps you could now sit him up to the blackboard and teach him the 5-7-5 syllable rule for good haiku, and I'm sure he will quickly grasp the need for the seasonal requirement. Then read him some real haiku, that should do the trick. Adeline

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Heather Wilkins 12 August 2013

ha ha I like this one a very smart doggie

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John Hardesty 15 July 2013

T: Is it Poetry Many believe there's some great powerful art in writing Haiku! ! Personally, I can write them in 5 seconds, making a pun that my dog could even create one, got it, is that complicated?

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