Wednesday, May 9, 2007

Cry A Tear Comments

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Cry a tear for the women of abuse
Cry a tear for those who abuse
Cry a tear those in broken marraiges
Cry a tear for everyone who feels used
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Alf Hutchison 06 April 2009

Thank you for showing us that we should have compassion..and tears are a certain sign of compassion... very well put.

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Lovemo Queen 19 January 2009

i see 2 sides to the poem..i see all the harsh bad things in the world but at the same time...why cry? what is crying going to do? why be sad, why not do something? so as you see my feelings are mixed. It was very well written and almost fun to read but the message is iffey for me. But thank you for posting and writting this beautiful piece of work..maybe this world does just need to shed a tear...

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Yonela Mali 20 March 2008

this piece really makes onen think about the cruel world which we live in and yes it does make me want to cry a tear for not knowing what to do to help. great poem

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Ronald Stroman 09 May 2007

often... we all cry tears for each other... permit our tears, to cry for sincere help.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 09 May 2007

This is a very good poem bringing out most of the unpardonable crimes that are taking place in the world Even if we shed gallons of tears for the victims, will these crimes stop? GOK (God only knows) .

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