Crystal Heart Poem by Rini Shibu
Crystal Heart
Crystal is my heart which you broke
shattered into pieces on to the ground
and now I am waiting for you
to glue each pieces back without any gap
and fill it with your love up to the brim
To soothe my pain and stop this bleed
No matter the uneven shape you give
But be sure it does not leak out
and the love is at same level as before
I'm out of superlatives for your poems! This one is magical! (Seems I found one more)
Rini, a clever use of a metaphor. Can love lost be ever put together again.10
Most significantly, you have started your literary journey (here in PH) at right time! Don’t pay attention to trivial matters! I don’t know how long I would be able to continue here but I am sure this is a beautiful literary world with so many nice people around! If you have created a good piece of work, that will get dividend in due course! Pray God provide you enough strength to consolidate your gifted creative talent in penning beautiful poems days ahead! For this poem…10
Dear Rini, this is an emotional write! I feel I should put here some words that could solace your poetic heart! I was browsing a few of your recent poems and found that they are a bit off colour! I don’t know who has broken your heart! But I am sure the person who can break such a delicate heart would never come to mend it! Just forgive and forget! Rini, you are known for writing beautiful poems which are appreciated by many readers! (Cont…)
Hi Rini, Heart break and the need for mending it expressed with true emotions. Good write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/23/2024 4:45:30 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Great heartfelt poem about crystal heart.