Daffodil Dancer Dandelion Dreams Poem by Susan Lacovara

Daffodil Dancer Dandelion Dreams

Rating: 5.0


To dance outside
In the daffodils...
Oh I will, I will, I will

To deep breathe, inside
Refreshed lungs to fill...
Oh I will, I will, I will

It's a calling back
Sweet scent, lilac
Where, for moments, I will mill
To be renewed
where seeds are strewn
Picking pleasantries' plumes

I, to lie, in flourish green
Long linger, in bladed twill
Blowing dandelion wishes, free
With more wishes, greater, still...

Where crocus tip their hats, 'hello'
Yellow streaks against blue skies
A symphony plays upon the breeze
Awake, realized alive...

The cricket's concerto violin
Bows drawn, with joy, instill
My heart to thaw, and yes, once more
Oh I will, I will, I will

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(02/04/14) Three major snowstorms in one week, will certainly leave one yearning to pry free from winter's hardened grasp...Oh to greet the Halcyon days of Spring! ! ! ! PEACE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Reed 05 February 2014

I also cant wait for the crocuses to tip their hats 'hello'- great writing of pent-up hope for the coming of Spring and all it's wonderful things. Archibald Lampmans 'April in the Hills' I think captures that moment when Spring arrives.

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Anthony Burkett 04 February 2014

I love this! It feels of being a child again... in a field of tall grass with spring in the air... with my heart filled with new love... and believing in the wishes made true by blowing dandelion seeds to the wind... sweeter still... goodnight...

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