Daisy Chain Alley Poem by Not Long Left

Daisy Chain Alley

Rating: 5.0


Rusty railings lend their shadows
to the narrow strech of a beer littered
alleyway.
Drooping bare branches
like tired limbs
hang over the graffiti'd grey wall.
A bodiless cat, with maralade eyes
purrs with acrobatic pride,
tight rope prancing on a leaf littered gutter.
Leaves stream past my feet
their autumn cries of decay
silenced as they swirl into the tarmac
river below.
A mouldy bearded football
rests between a half drowned trolley
and a slime shinning brick.
Daisy chain alley
Dead, decaying narrow valley
Only now do I question your name.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 20 July 2006

Fantastic piece, Vincent. Wonderful picture painted here, so real. Super read, and super write. Brilliant. Love Ernestine XXX

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Declan McHenry 20 July 2006

Vincent, a darkly worked vignette. Neat indeed.

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Francesca Johnson 20 July 2006

I had to think about the bodiless cat for a minute (but understood in the end) . I liked the phrases; they all built up into a vision in my head which contrasted wonderfully with the name 'Daisy Chain Alley.' Love, Fran xx

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