The little girls did laugh and play
Upon that hot and sunny day
Upon the grass the children lay
Making daisy chains.
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This one should be sung by the children you describe. It has the delightful playfulness of a nursery rhyme. Charming piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Lovely flowing poem with a touch of sentimental thoughts of youth. Just delightful, just right. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Something about this one that makes me want to cry, , , Your words are like nectar Love duncan X
the anti-climax is good breaking the refrain in the end....wonderful nature imagery as ever.... **Abha**
Andrew my friend, Children will love this beautiful tribute to youth poem....Many readers will try and put a melody to your fine expression. Great job '10' best wishes Jon