Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Daisy Chains Comments

Rating: 5.0

The little girls did laugh and play
Upon that hot and sunny day
Upon the grass the children lay
Making daisy chains.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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~ Jon London ~ 30 May 2008

Andrew my friend, Children will love this beautiful tribute to youth poem....Many readers will try and put a melody to your fine expression. Great job '10' best wishes Jon

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Alison Cassidy 11 May 2008

This one should be sung by the children you describe. It has the delightful playfulness of a nursery rhyme. Charming piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ernestine Northover 09 May 2008

Lovely flowing poem with a touch of sentimental thoughts of youth. Just delightful, just right. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 09 May 2008

Something about this one that makes me want to cry, , , Your words are like nectar Love duncan X

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Abha Sharma 08 May 2008

the anti-climax is good breaking the refrain in the end....wonderful nature imagery as ever.... **Abha**

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