Dance The Slow Music, The Sandstorm Swirls Poem by Rani Turton

Dance The Slow Music, The Sandstorm Swirls

Rating: 4.4


The sandstorm swirls, pebbles and sand
Hitting dour walls
Dance, dance the slow music
Elements appeasing music
Music appeasing elements

Pulse and body and sand
The music is one with the sand that whirls
Hide, hide the face that burns
Close, close the eyes that burn
Because of the storm in the city
No more passion, no more pity
There were mirages with shimmering paths
There were trodden truths and treacherous theories
And home's horizons far, far away.

Dance the slow music
Cease the howling wind, the phantoms
Of the sand that can speak with strange gifts
The old man on his rope-bed with bleary eyes
Remembers and speaks

Of old forgotten things; some people listen
Waiting for the wind to fall

Sand will, leaves will fall, trees that bend
Life stands still, dance the slow music, the sandstorm swirls
Wait and heed nature's call.

Copyright: Rani Turton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 April 2009

The sandstorm swirls, pebbles and sand Hitting dour walls Dance, dance the slow music Elements appeasing music Music appeasing elements.......................Wonderful lines..............written from the spirit that is feeling divine joy............10+++..........

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Ron Flowers 19 April 2009

I love the flow of this, I love the musical quality, truly a pleasure to read. Ron

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Fiona Davidson 16 April 2009

Brilliant write Rani...just flows from start to finish...10++++

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Wojja Fink 16 April 2009

What awonderful title and poem....oh.the joy of finding a new poet.....John

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

what can i say? .. this is a work of ARt! 10+++++

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Fay Slimm 14 April 2009

Beautifully constructed and very informative - this piece is a pleasure to read.... tank you Rani... and top marks from Fay...

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