Ken e Hall

*** Dancing In Flowers ***

You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
Sliding down rainbows nearer to you,

You hide behind daisies with buttercup class
Still peeking thru' locks of a golden haired lass,
A bunny falls back as you quickly dance by
As I float down from the super blue sky.

Ah, I see you soft an' so still in a beautiful pose
Smiling hiding in the folds of a rose,
For a kiss indeed I miss thorns so scary,
Inside the rose it's all in a day's work for the love
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of a fairy.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 1, 2011
Poem Edited: Friday, July 24, 2015

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (5/6/2018 4:20:00 AM)

    Sweet and enjoyable.

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (9/3/2017 4:39:00 AM)

    Lovely light piece of work shared. Enjoyed.

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  • Pamela SinicropePamela Sinicrope (11/23/2015 6:55:00 AM)

    Wow! This was the best imagery. I felt just like a love fairy as I read it. I wish I could slide down a love rainbow! The imagery at the end got a bit more complex, which kept the poem interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks!

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (10/9/2015 9:52:00 AM)

    You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
    I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
    Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
    Sliding down rainbows nearer to you, such a lovely poem with lots and lots of images. your imagination is amazing. i loved reading it. thank you very much

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  • Abdulrazak AralimattiAbdulrazak Aralimatti (9/30/2015 9:49:00 PM)

    Verily, a lovely rhyming verse

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  • Akhtar Jawad (7/25/2015 6:55:00 AM)

    The poem is beautiful painting, simply amazing and wonderful.

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  • Ayman ParrayAyman Parray (6/6/2015 7:05:00 AM)

    An amazing poem, Ken. Brings a smile to my heart and eases my mind of worldly cares.

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  • Allotey Abossey (6/6/2015 12:39:00 AM)

    This poem is biut'ful and I love the flow, like a song. God bless you

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  • Dorothy- A. HolmesDorothy- A. Holmes (5/6/2015 9:44:00 PM)

    A lovely verse, thank you for the smile!
    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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  • Elena SanduElena Sandu (5/2/2015 3:58:00 PM)

    How could I miss this gem? Inloved with your poem! Yes, the dance of beauty could make us walk on clouds. Hiding between daisies with buttercup class a wonderful choice of words, splendid imaagery, who would not love such richness! Thank you for sharing!

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  • S.zaynab KamoonpuriS.zaynab Kamoonpuri (4/17/2015 12:50:00 PM)

    Wow fantastic! I read more of yor poems today but this one was of the masterpieces! So imaginative and creative and makes readers soar with yor words and fly like fairies. Kudos! Great to read u again.

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (2/25/2015 9:23:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful, charming poem with inspired lines that give a touch of magic to this truly delightful poem!

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  • Loyd C Taylor SrLoyd C Taylor Sr (2/8/2015 12:16:00 PM)

    Hello poet Ken. This was an absolutely charming poem, well done. Loyd Taylor

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  • Elisha Wall (1/21/2015 12:04:00 AM)

    A lovely poem! Beautiful imagery that allows the reader to see the love in the air. Loved it! Thanks

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  • John Ugolo UmahJohn Ugolo Umah (1/11/2015 2:09:00 PM)

    Wow! I applaud this sire, I so much love to be loved and this piece is just so wonderful, keep writing sire.

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  • Jeri MartindaleJeri Martindale (12/27/2014 3:02:00 PM)

    I knew she was a fairy! !

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  • Amanda Grube (11/25/2014 12:45:00 AM)

    love this one. it make think about everything happened to me

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  • Shania K. YounceShania K. Younce (10/18/2014 1:57:00 PM)

    This is truly a beautiful poem. Bien!

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (9/23/2014 4:52:00 AM)

    Such a sweet and romantic poem... with great rhythm and rhyme scheme. Lovely!

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  • Chris ZachariouChris Zachariou (7/12/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. It takes me to another world where there is magic and wonder. And the sweetness of love, great.

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