Dark Flower Poem by Barry Middleton

Dark Flower

Rating: 4.5


There is a place, a river run,
dark flowers by the path.

And many lovers pass this way,
escaping earthly wrath.

There I cut the richest bloom
of royal and regal hue.

And this is all I have to give.
I bring it here for you.

I found that forest in a dream.
I walked the river run.

Alas, the vision had to fade,
to match the setting sun.

So I must seek the dream again,
and find the garden lane.

For it will guide me unto peace,
and shelter me from pain.

Dark Flower
Thursday, January 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,love,path,river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret O Driscoll 30 January 2016

Beautiful, 'it will guide me unto peace and shelter me from pain'

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I suggest unifying the transition from one line to the next: all comas; all no punctuation; or [even] periods. Control the tempo of the reader as best you can. Don't trust them/us to get it. I love the language & images.

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