Dark Forest Comments

It as it is talkn to me... Coz iam in my own cage wer i lost my self gud one

Such a powerful poem. It's so beautiful...great job

This is long but beautiful. My favorite lines: 'Perhaps it is the glow that keeps me sane… For I am not well; I am scared.' -amazing.

Very nice indeed. Keep writing.

It is really a nice poem. Very nice.10 for it.

im so excited tha you graced us with such a lovely poem

your poem has a lovely flow to it...its a wonderful read, thanks for sharing....

i like both of your peom...the way you write just said it by self keep writing greet poem

intense and reflective. v nice, thanks IAWIA.

Beautiful work. I loved it.

Well I normally don't read pieces this long; but your story, and the way you wrote it kept my attention all the way through. That is not just because of the story, it is because of the way you presented it to me. This is a natural skill that cannot be taught. Never let anyone say that you cannot write. Though you are young, talent cannot be hidden. I'm giving you a ten and I am collecting this as a favorite of mine. I wanted to see who you are. Now I know. May God and His angel be with you forever. Greenwolfe 1962 You might like to read my poem 'Circle of Angels.'