Darkness Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Darkness

Rating: 4.9


Darkness is a quiet friend
That embraces me so tight
When doubts I cannot end
It helps me feel alright

Darkness is a faithful ally
That backs up willingly
Until all worries fly
It serves unendingly

Darkness is a brave comrade
That helps me hide the pain
Though I am hurt and sad
I feel so brave again

Though I'm so crippled
Though I'm very broken
Though I'm ever down
And very very torn

Why worry, why cry
Let all the problems fly
No need to feel so shy
With darkness I'll get by

Darkness is a quiet friend
Darkness is a faithfull ally
Darkness is a brave comrade
My friend with you I'm glad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This poem is really excellent naida! ! v definite 10

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Alon Dy 10 September 2012

This is a wonderful poem! good work kabayan!

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Autumn Winds 26 April 2012

I happen to love this poem. Darkness and oblivion helps me forget the sturggles and pains in my life. Reality is harsh and it's nice to escape.

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Diana Rose Tolentino 03 October 2011

In darkness you can hide, hide you from the world and others' sight But it cannot hide you from yourself. And it is youself that you have to face. Well..i can't help but answer back. Your poem inspires me. Yes, darkness is a friend when it suits you. It helps you redeem and pick yourself up, without having the eyes of the world that expects you to fall again. But beware, you can get lost in the darkness. So when you are brave enough again..step into the light my friend. Ahhh...I feel so good. Thanks again for another great poem.

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Joseph Juarez 04 September 2011

this is a great poem i thought about it darkness is a great friend it can hide me from the world but you cant rely or hide in darkness forever. sometimes you need light to guide you

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Marvin Brato 06 November 2013

Darkness is a camouflage to cover innate thoughts and feelings.... it assimilate sentiments which actually lighten up the burden!

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

many emotions can be hid in the darkness. Its the light of day that gets us sometimes. good write

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Mohabeer Beeharry 25 August 2013

This poem is so full of messages. Darkness or forced loneliness may not be a cure. But they give you time to rejuvenate, a certain chance to reassess. I like the writing. Well done. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Arabella Picken 10 August 2013

This is Brilliant. Love it

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Deepak Sawhney 04 August 2013

Very beautifully expressed.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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