Theodora (Theo) Onken

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Darkness - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

The darkness opens for anyone
It welcomes always with open arms
Making promise's of the ungodly
Is a 'Pied Piper' of darker charms
Upon many a bright sunny day
Darkness embraces the shadow's behind
It hugs the secret wrong's planned and done
With sinful machination's - -it captures our mind
For it is after all of us
Our mind, our body and our soul
And it will never be satisfied
Until it's 'Evil' has taken control


By, Theodora Onken

January 15,2016

Topic(s) of this poem: temptation

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Temptation's that lead to wrongs. More to the point- a black Jeep Liberty...following orders.

Comments about Darkness by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • (4/22/2016 10:55:00 PM)


    Thank you Dr. Anthony Theodore for reading and commenting. i needed to write about the darkness because there is so much evil in this world...and in the evil spawned hell is where i WOULD NEVER want to be. i choose to stay away from the darkness and remain in the light of my God and his son, Jesus... (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/20/2016 7:42:00 AM)


    Darkness embraces the shadow's behind
    It hugs the secret wrong's planned and done
    With sinful machination's - -it captures our mind... body and soul, evil, darkness. so many ideas you hve expressed well in an attractive way in this poem. dear poetess. thank you. tony

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    and comment and vote it. I did it for you now Thank you. Tony God bless you. Please don’t forget to vote the poem. Voting is important in this website.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 15, 2016

Poem Edited: Friday, January 15, 2016


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