Charming looks
Eyes so captivating
Glittering jewellery
Traditional outfit
Coloured Bangles
Sparkling in sunlight
Golden ear drops
An oscillating pendulum
Silver anklets
An Angels walk
Teasing hands
Tormenting to grab
Flashing smile
A stroke of lightning
Butterfly clips
Knitting hair
Falling from
Heaven to earth
Beauty personified
My darling
In my dream!
Mesmerizing poem, excellently worded. A 19 Full Vote, Vijay. Thank you for sharing.
You must FIRST reply all ur poets who have responded Then you need to edit this poem All first letters need not be in caps that's a compy's soft ware system not poetry since you are 1975 born you naturally are more romantic/sexy Compose poetry on your living LOVES accordingly..u must be having many Darlings in dreams are superficial imagery You may redo this if you please Thanks for the invite I wonder what made u pick me up. Read some of mine too ''MOM SMILES'' WOULD DO GOOD FOR YOU also read it to your Darling real one o poet
Nice description of your darling......the weightage of jewellery seems to be more....however it is as per your dream....well written....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Vijay, Darling In My Dream is a nice poem; everybody will have their darling in their mind; But the darlings put on lot of weight that could not be tolerated by us like Rhdha and Ambiga; But there are still a few darlings maintained their physique even though they become old like Sarojadevi, Vyjayanthimala, L.Vijayalakshmi and kanchana for example. Have you seen L.Vijayalakshmi dancing with MGR, Adalutan paatalaik kEttu rasippathilEthaan sukam sugam sugam. Yours sincerely, V.K.Kanniappan