Crying Cactus Poem by Vijay Sai R

Wow! you got the center of what is life.....a destined life to service belongs to you.... my bow and salute...you have made life so wonderful.....God bless I like your style God bless....a 10 with a Star....

isnt this how women are trained to regard men as sthlworth and somewhat unfeelinng so untrue

Very Nice. Almost a haike or synue if you reversed lines 2 and 3. Not a criticism, just an observation.

Meter is 6-6-9...this is haiku/senryu. I am full of thorns. Who dares think a tender heart inside.[[[period]]]]]does this help you tighten this wonderful poem? ? ? Just a thought! ! !

Well said. I wish the cactus said something more, its qualities abound, you see...

Lovely Title: Smart Alliteration. Even a rude looking one, is not always rude in the inside. A thought provoking poem, well worded and in brevity. I looked at the title and I clicked to read the poem, but what do I see? I had responded last year, WOW! Exactly in the same month December! A brilliant poem though a brevity. A 10 full vote.

It is not always true what you see from the outside. A thought provoking poem, well worded in brevity. Thank you for sharing this intriguing poem.

Perfection captured in a few lines! Very touching as most wouldn't care to think, rather than the appearence of things

Sheer truth in a few lines! I loved it!

Nice touching poem.Expression of emotion in few word really attracts.Best wishes.