Though I am full of thorns
Nobody dares to think
I too have a tender heart inside!
isnt this how women are trained to regard men as sthlworth and somewhat unfeelinng so untrue
Very Nice. Almost a haike or synue if you reversed lines 2 and 3. Not a criticism, just an observation.
Meter is 6-6-9...this is haiku/senryu. I am full of thorns. Who dares think a tender heart inside.[[[period]]]]]does this help you tighten this wonderful poem? ? ? Just a thought! ! !
Well said. I wish the cactus said something more, its qualities abound, you see...
Lovely Title: Smart Alliteration. Even a rude looking one, is not always rude in the inside. A thought provoking poem, well worded and in brevity. I looked at the title and I clicked to read the poem, but what do I see? I had responded last year, WOW! Exactly in the same month December! A brilliant poem though a brevity. A 10 full vote.
It is not always true what you see from the outside. A thought provoking poem, well worded in brevity. Thank you for sharing this intriguing poem.
Perfection captured in a few lines! Very touching as most wouldn't care to think, rather than the appearence of things
Sheer truth in a few lines! I loved it!
Nice touching poem.Expression of emotion in few word really attracts.Best wishes.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Wow! you got the center of what is life.....a destined life to service belongs to you.... my bow and salute...you have made life so wonderful.....God bless I like your style God bless....a 10 with a Star....