Crying Cactus Poem by Vijay Sai R

Crying Cactus

Rating: 3.6

Though I am full of thorns
Nobody dares to think
I too have a tender heart inside!

Antonio Liao 17 January 2010

Wow! you got the center of what is life.....a destined life to service belongs to you.... my bow and have made life so wonderful.....God bless I like your style God bless....a 10 with a Star....

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Gul naz 18 January 2010

in these concise lines you have accurately portrayed the truth of life. great

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Sumita Datta 29 January 2010

I truly agree you.. I am a cactus lover.. and i feel the same when people come to garden and doesn't even look at them but praise other little plants and flowers... :)

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Michael Brock 21 April 2010

Beautiful haiku wonderfully written Michael

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Edna Ipalei 21 May 2010

that is great. it is very poetic

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2018

Lovely Title: Smart Alliteration. Even a rude looking one, is not always rude in the inside. A thought provoking poem, well worded and in brevity. I looked at the title and I clicked to read the poem, but what do I see? I had responded last year, WOW! Exactly in the same month December! A brilliant poem though a brevity. A 10 full vote.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2017

It is not always true what you see from the outside. A thought provoking poem, well worded in brevity. Thank you for sharing this intriguing poem.

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Kewayne Wadley 19 June 2015

Perfection captured in a few lines! Very touching as most wouldn't care to think, rather than the appearence of things

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Leloudia Migdali 31 August 2014

Sheer truth in a few lines! I loved it!

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Sarojini Pattayat 01 May 2013

Nice touching poem.Expression of emotion in few word really attracts.Best wishes.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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