Daughter's: S Love Poem by Fatima Obaid

Daughter's: S Love

Rating: 5.0


what is the best voice ever be
i dance and dance finally listening to you
what is the best game ever be
i jump and jump finally finding you
what is the best taste ever be
i yum and yum finally having your food
what is the best moment ever be
i run and run finally hugging you
who is the best friend ever be
i smile and smile finally watching you
who is the best Teacher ever be
i clap and clap finally praising you
who stands with me on my every fall
i think and think finally rest at you
Whose lips are on your forhead and cheeka
I laugh and laugh finally having your kiss
who is the one upon which my love ends
i cry and cry finally loving you mom

Wednesday, April 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A dedicational poem for my Love my Mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 May 2015

Wow a lovely unique poem leaping in the mommys lap! U wrote it in such a nice hearty way and style. U apreciate mother well. Thumbs up!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 15 April 2015

Wonderful thoughts, beautifully framed in to a resounding rhythm to yield a rose bud to be offered to a loving mom. Enjoyed! Thank you for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 15 April 2015

Beautiful, Fatima. I have four daughters and the love I have for them is without compare. Thank you for sharing your poem Peace

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