Dawn Poem by pablo picasso

Dawn

Rating: 4.0


The dawn that day rose
Just as the mist of the night
Subsided like a foam descending
To reveal clear water ahead
The Bees in the hive stirred about
To retrieve more honey
It was on that day that I stared into the
Mirror of luck.
Hours passed by just
As flies whizzed under a scorchy sun
The foam above the crystal water rose again
The mist of the dusk rose high above me
shattering the mirror to grits
I plunged down from a mountain
Into the depths of dreariness
It was then that I acknowledged
What I've been through
It was then that I screamed
'HEY, day! It was now that I crystallized
your power in the miror of my mind'
And thence I sat in the chair of dreariness
Waiting for the gleams of gold and silver
To shine on once more upon the mirror.

Friday, June 12, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: bees,mirror,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 12 May 2014

'HEY, day! It was now that I crystallized your power in the miror of my mind' Lovely lines of a nice poem.

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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Nice poem Mr Picasso

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Rajaram Ramachandran 22 September 2009

So nice is the dawn, I enjoyed the flow of words that made it remarkable.

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premji premji 13 June 2009

beautiful dawn.. welcome to poemhunter

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Fay Slimm 12 June 2009

I like the flow and metre of this poem and it is penned with maturity of thought too.... a very good first attempt and worth every one of the ten I am giving it...10 evey best wish for future writing from Fay...

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