Friday, February 15, 2019

Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

His golden mane raying around like a floodlight
Young sun rises espousing earth.Born his son 'Day'
Boosted with his dad's might Day sprawls in delight
Enacting a play of life that grows in flora and faunae
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Indira Renganathan
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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

its really wonderful imagery expression- Seems a hue drop of heaven fallen on this earth When the above azure's seen in the vast aqua ring/// love it

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M Asim Nehal 21 February 2019

Beyond 10+++++++++for this wonderful poem.

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M Asim Nehal 21 February 2019

Awesome poem, loved it the way you worded it. An artistic poem for me. As his seven horses trot steady sun is blazing His arc-way of rising high to dive in aqua again In sweltering speed Day follows his dad's shifting Unaware of life's other side night-clutched amain

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Valsa George 18 February 2019

The day arrives majestically in Sun's chariot driven by seven horses! This royal entourage attending the princess Day is beautifully and poetically described here!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 February 2019

Nature is truly very beautiful and merciful. Many light rays motivate mind and we feel tenderness of light and this encourages us very much. We hear the musical voice of nature with greater perspective. Thank you very much for sharing this master piece of poem. ..10

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