Adeaze Tinkerbelle

Dead At 14 - Poem by Adeaze Tinkerbelle

Inspired by a poem I read in 'Chicken Soup For The Teenager's Soul'.

I am static
Agony and pain stabs my mind
As I lay here and die alone
I thought I had everything
What is wrong with me?
I'm not dead yet
I have so much to live for still
I'm too young
But I know that I am too late
I see my parents grief
With sad eyes
Friends and family come up and touch my hand
For the last time
This can't be goodbye!
But you can't hear my desperate screams
Goodbye mom, dad
I will miss you
Goodbye forever

Comments about Dead At 14 by Adeaze Tinkerbelle

  • (10/23/2006 11:41:00 PM)

    this is a good poem.. our generations seem to be plagued with depression no one young can avoid it.. and we're all washed away by the pain of it all.. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/16/2006 1:53:00 PM)

    i love your peoms.

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  • (5/13/2006 4:43:00 AM)

    This is a sad poem indeed. I agree with Patricia, we must live life to the full as we never know whats round the next corner. And let people know that we love them. This is a great poem from someone so young. Keep writing, Dallas.

    Love, Fran xx
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  • (5/12/2006 10:20:00 PM)

    hi i am really sorry about that inedent May i it okay if i ask this question Who i that about beuae i ried when iread that poem (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2006 10:09:00 PM)

    So sad, once we are gone we can not say the final words. Thats why we should life and care like we know not when the end is near.

    Patricia Gale
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  • (5/12/2006 9:18:00 PM)

    its really very sad.......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 12, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, April 21, 2008

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