Dead Stars Poem by Sonya Florentino

Dead Stars

Rating: 5.0


I didn't know they were dead stars
Was I praying to the dark
Following the wrong charts
Leading further from the heart

Was I simply going nowhere
Stranded in the past
Making all the wrong turns
Tripping, tripping on my tracks

Lost in the dark
But I know I'll find my way
I don't want to stay
In the dark
Where it seems I've been everywhere
But nowhere near the heart
Lost from the start

I have to learn to listen
To my heart and nothing else
I'll have to cross the distance
Before I can be myself
Find myself, free myself

© 2009 Sonya Florentino

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 15 August 2009

Nobody could say you don't think like a poet. Any self respecting writer would be jealous of those first lines. After after recovering from the jealousy..in awe, of course!

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How magnificently introspective and honest. And oh how we try to find the right path. A marvelous write, I could feel myself in your words!

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Sandra Fowler 26 February 2009

Love your title. In my mind I can see those lightless stars. You are in good poetic voice in this one, Sonya.10, of course. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Sonya Florentino

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Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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