Death Before Death Poem by anam naz

Death Before Death

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walking through the lonely streets,
passing through the flowers and weeds,
they neither weep nor cry,
towards them woes creep and they just die.

looking at the smiling faces,
starring at the happy races,
only sorrows are there for them to buy,
their heart bleeds and they just die.

when autumn ends with all its cruelties,
and springs comes there to joy,
they pretend to be happy they seem to smile
but they cant enjoy, they just die.

they are those, who lose the one,
they always loved and never wanted to say bye
without them they cant live
and they just die.........................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 20 January 2012

You have posted an xlent poem. fabulous. the flow of writing is so nice that can not be described. you are a great poet. keep it up.

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Ramesh Rai 20 January 2012

Top marks Naz. Really you have posted a fabulous poem with a nice flow. You are such a good poet that can not be imagined. keep it up

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Dave Walker 20 January 2012

A really great poem, really liked it. A fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Innocent Man.

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